News writing tips

I am into blogging field, use to run many blogs. But my English is dammmmm poor , it sucks
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My writing skill seems to be noob type, any idea how to improve the writing skill. I don't want to run to some institutions to learn it (struggling with time shortage).

Hope to get some nice tips to improve it, anyway check my recent entry which i had written just 10 min before,
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Ascend D quad

The Ascend D quad is powered by K3V2 quad-core processor with clock speed ranging from 1.2 GHz to 1.5 GHz, which is being claimed by Huawei as the fastest quad-core processor made for mobile devices till date.

The phone boasts 1GB RAM and comes equipped with 4.5-inch HD display and offers 32-bit true color graphics processors with 330ppi pixel density. The new impressive graphics processor will surely make Apple run for its money; Huawei also claims the display to perform much better than other Smartphones under direct sunlight condition.

The rear of the phone gets 8MP shooter with back-lit sensor; it is capable to record 1080p Full HD movies. The front of the phone comes with 1.3MP camera to take care of all your video calling and mobile conferencing needs.

The Ascend D Quad gets 1800mAh battery which makes the phone keep on running for two days in normal usage condition. This has been made possible by the Huawei very own Power Management Technology which do increase the battery life upto 30%.

The phone looks stylish and measures just 8.9mm in thickness making it the slimmest Smartphone running on Android 4.0 ICS. It weighs just 130 grams making it easier to carry and move. For music enthusiastic the phone gets Dolby Digital 5.1 sound enhancement and earSmart technology, both the technology joins together in order to offer mind boggling audio listening experience.  

The Huawei Quad-core Ascend D quad phone is expected to be available globally by Q3 of 2012. Huawei also confirmed that their flagship phone will be 20-30% cheaper than that of the Samsung’s devices.
 
You may want to do the following things:

a) See a shrink

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Get your ISP and all other ISPs in your region to never provide you with internet access

c) Seek out something you are good at, anf become better, and eventually the best at it.

Nuff said..cheers

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Considering the standard of ur previous threads, this is an improvement
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Can u post the links of some of ur blogs?

Buy Wren & Martin. And learn, best option
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Considering the standard of ur previous threads, this is an improvement
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Can u post the links of some of ur blogs?

Buy Wren & Martin. And learn, best option
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Tech2online.com, Autoblog2.com, Techbuy.in, Windowsphoneguide.com

This are the blogs which i had started just 1-2 months ago
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, rest remain hidden
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Being.Smart original name Vipin Sharma (That's what the Whois record says)

Those sites are registered long back.

http://whois.domaint...tech2online.com -Registered on name Vipin Bhuarya

http://whois.domaint...m/autoblog2.com - Vipin Sharma

http://whois.domaint....com/techbuy.in - Registered on name Riyaz Basha

http://whois.domaint...m/autoblog2.com - Vipin Sharma

i register them, make some post, and leave the site for 8 month to 1 year, so that they they enough old in order to get good SERP, and old aged domains always gets Higher priority and are easy in seo, google loves aged domain
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and as per name, my original name is Bhuarya only, not Sharma
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