Rock Party Flyer

rPOk

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I made this flyer in Adobe Illustrator for a rock party at my place next month.

How does it look?

Took 6 hours, am quite happy with the end result :)

Initial colorful version - too gay for a rock party :p

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Blackified version - much dark

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Complete black version - color goes well with grunge look

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rPOk

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Well now that i look at it, yeah it does :p

I wanted it to be all black...whadaya all suggest...i mean it's a rock party flyer and not a fashion party flyer :p
 

pr0ing

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the colours remind me of 'That 70's Show'
if you dont go with the all black idea, try using darker shades of the colours you have already used.
 

rPOk

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uploaded 2 more versions...comments? any other better color scheme? or should i try shades of black?

Any comments on the overall design?

there's a funky design at back - that took some time...also the boombox art in background
 

kippu

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try a black base with grey letters ..will go with your "black dress code " and throw in a hint of red somewhere
 

Anticlocked

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change the font.....dont use font thats extremely unclear for flyers...did one for college with unclear but cool looking fonts.........got belted
 

rPOk

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yeah 6 hours...not for the implementation but also thinking the design....the back designs seem easy, but they aren't...and playing with colors/fonts took the most time.

point taken on the pink color and 1900 font.
 

Powersurge

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Just a few tips:

A general thumb rule for design: Do not use more than 2 fonts. (Instead try alternating the same font by using it either in bold/italics etc)
Also, when using Illustrator, you can use the transform tool to change the size and the shape of every character of the font you're using.

Choose a color pallete that you are going to work with. To the design challenged, i suggest you go to COLOURlovers :: Color Trends + Palettes and look for something aesthetically pleasing

Respect empty/blank space. Don't feel the need to fill your blank space with either a background, or a pattern, or text just because it looks "empty"
Just my 2 paise.
 

rPOk

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^^ i think most people might not have seen the flyer designs for a rock party.

Go to flickr and search for rock party flyer and you'll come across designs like these - all mish mash, broken fonts, lots of fonts - that's how its supposed to be...not clean, elegant or anything
 

roman1627

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The flyer is kewlll...i like the black and white version of it.....by the way the deck in the background of the picture looks super kewll.....but just a suggestion.......the punch line of the Flyer can be colored...to attract direct attention to it.....:D