@Dark Star :
I glanced over that screenshot, and grimaced.
1. What is TEXT and VOICE. Looks so unprofessional and juvenile.
2. Keep the adjectives at a minimal. Flowering prose like: "challenging career"; "rich evolving"; "pragmatic fields"; "accolades" -sound- lame and over done.
3. Do not use short forms. &&&
4. No need to highlight something in the synopsis of your career graph. It will be read first, or ignored. It glares out.
5. Why are you using colloquial lingo like: "budding"; "knack"; "digging around"; "deep dive".
6. The grammar and structure is bouncing between 1st person and 3rd person. Basically the English structure is just not correct. Any recruiter (not HR but front line) will find this highly irritating. It sets a strong base.
7. Do not use Latin substitutes for English. Example: Academia. It is way too archaic in today's world. Basically adds nothing.
8. Do not use center - aligned justification. Harder to read. Right or left aligned is best. Better keep it left aligned cause English readers prefer that. Unless you are sending your CV to the Gulf.
9. Keep sentence short and crisp. Run-ons display a lack of English education, and are extremely difficult to read from a readers cognition point of view.
10. Use incremental numbers or bullets. Not hashes. Why..?
11. Remove Erodov. Please. That is a spam site. If any potential manager opens it, they will rubbish your CV. Sorry.
I glanced over that screenshot, and grimaced.
1. What is TEXT and VOICE. Looks so unprofessional and juvenile.
2. Keep the adjectives at a minimal. Flowering prose like: "challenging career"; "rich evolving"; "pragmatic fields"; "accolades" -sound- lame and over done.
3. Do not use short forms. &&&
4. No need to highlight something in the synopsis of your career graph. It will be read first, or ignored. It glares out.
5. Why are you using colloquial lingo like: "budding"; "knack"; "digging around"; "deep dive".
6. The grammar and structure is bouncing between 1st person and 3rd person. Basically the English structure is just not correct. Any recruiter (not HR but front line) will find this highly irritating. It sets a strong base.
7. Do not use Latin substitutes for English. Example: Academia. It is way too archaic in today's world. Basically adds nothing.
8. Do not use center - aligned justification. Harder to read. Right or left aligned is best. Better keep it left aligned cause English readers prefer that. Unless you are sending your CV to the Gulf.
9. Keep sentence short and crisp. Run-ons display a lack of English education, and are extremely difficult to read from a readers cognition point of view.
10. Use incremental numbers or bullets. Not hashes. Why..?
11. Remove Erodov. Please. That is a spam site. If any potential manager opens it, they will rubbish your CV. Sorry.
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