Short story competition?

My Short Story

Came to office from Home
Travelled By Rickshaw for 25
Waited for Bus 20 Mins
Travelled By Bus 25 Mins

After reaching office, I screamed aloud Sh*t!!
Realised that mah post office was open :(.
DC.
 
Originally ~HeadShot~,
Then morphed into The Deadly One...,
Then formed The ~H~ Company,
Then left the ~H~ Rule and got back to studies.
:P :bleh: :tongue:
 
hindi moveie---- hero---- god blessed soul--- noble laurate in literature--- can compose songs (spot composition)---- s'thing that wud baffle kalidas himsef----- always dance round the trees with a girl--- villian with crude sense of humour--- always laughs for no apparent reason--- very funny huh?-- must wear dark glasses--- explosion-- the car is torn apart-- yet our god blessed fella walks out with the whole of his attire intact--- punches the villians who start defying gravity--- villian still finds s'thing to laugh about.... ......... after that u imagine....
 
hmm....

kingdom---king n queen---beautiful princess---she fell in love wit prince of neighbouring kingdom when he went for hunting, and came across the park! ;)---got married--happily lived for some yrs--prince became the king thn-- some king aof another kingdom invades--- prince gets killed-- queen(princess) escapes with maid-- disguises themselves and goes to a village in outskirts-- an old farmer gives them shelter-- both lives as servants in village houses-- tells farmer, their family got perished in the war--
the farmers son,S fells in lov with servant,Q(queen)--- and maid in disguise,M, loves S's best friend--- son and friend starts a business--- they make small profits --- maid, who tracks the friend, due to her lov, finds out tat the best friend is cheating the Son, and his aim is just to lure the profits and is having a bad eye on the Q--- maid is found by the friend and gets wounded--- on her way back, she informs the Son of the bad friend and his bad ideas---dies in his hands--- Son doesnt trust her words---- friend continues to troubles in business, and comes Son's house most of the time--- Q always lives in past thinking of prince, and kingdom----

to be continued.... ;)
 
Nikhil -> TE -> Reads Short story competition -> dies of laughter -> Comes back to haunt TE -> End of story....

Nikhil posted 1.27 minutes later:

@mods --- Please shift this to "testdrive" as this looks like becoming a loooong thread and never ending thread....

This is similar to the "Word COntinuity Game". Please shift to Testdrive
 
dosent matter as post counts are enabled in test drive section too :P
and i dont feel we are gonna have the amout of trash/spam (read posts) in this thread compared to the word continuity thread..
 
beedi said:
she fell in love wit prince of neighbouring kingdom when he went for hunting, and came across the park!
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No1 hunts in parks, unless he was trying to nail birds(read gals), in this case he was, so u shud say the prince went out for birdwatching :)
 
Ho0ligaN said:
No1 hunts in parks, unless he was trying to nail birds(read gals), in this case he was, so u shud say the prince went out for birdwatching :)
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wat i meant was "lost his way" and all are not like u to go for bird(gal)watching! :bleh:
 
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