It is not about gentleman talk, or slander talk. It is about fitment. I felt they did not fit in.
What you wrote, could be:
"khatam kar de in sab ko" or; "in sab ka kaam tamaam kar do"
There are so many movies on Mumbai gangsters, and mafia in Delhi. No, swear words are used. Or do only people in Bihar/UP swear. Haha
Well if you found they did not fit in or was over done , then its a different matter . I read your clarification after I had posted .
Then its seems fine .
No that is too gentle , phrases seem to be from Gabbar Singh's era . Just by hearing those I feel that its not some gangster but some thief try to be a wanna be .
But again we all have our imagination as to what a gangster or tapori might be , most of us havent even been close to one , atleast not me . So that perception can highly vary , also am not very sure what words they would use , again using my perception .
Anyways I respect your opinion , wasnt putting you down or something . Just some healthy discussion , hope you ll agree .
Cheers .
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That's what I was trying to see and this gentleman had to bring in my character and my family. I once went to Shivajinagar area in Bangalore and some of the slang they use might seem offensive to you, but it's their daily talk. And these guys are not even gangsters, just a random joe doing their job and getting on with life.
Well I dont like to name people so just put everything up together , it was actually adressing two different people . Hope you did not mix them .
I agree , where does family come in the picture I fail to understand , whats the relation anyways .
In responding to something what someone perceives as offensive , he ll respond with an offense instead of explaining his point of view properly . This is just in sour taste .